Smartphone one-pager
I chose to read an article by Market Watch,
titled “Teenagers believe smartphones make them more popular and less
depressed”. (https://www.marketwatch.com/story/teenagers-believe-smartphones-make-them-more-popular-and-less-depressed-2018-09-12) This article
immediately starts with the author giving facts about how significantly
the number of teenagers that have social media has increased in the
last six years. I found out that I am part of the 70% of teenagers that do have
it. However, I was still left wondering what age the teenagers who provided
information were, as they did not say in the article.
The next paragraph talks about how the “most
concerning is their belief that social media actually helps improve their
mental health” I found it odd that they referred to that
as concerning, especially because in that same paragraph they
continue to say that 20% of people felt better about themselves after social
media, and only 3% described themselves being more depressed. I assumed
that that would be a good thing, which leaves me wondering on the authors
perspective of it all.
In the paragraph after that however, they
talk about how 11 percent of “vulnerable teenagers” said social media made them
more depressed, which is 8 percent more than the teenagers with a
higher social-emotional well-being scale. Now I realize that that part may be
concerning, but as I kept reading I realized that there was still a
significant amount (29%) of vulnerable students that think it made them less
depressed.
In the next paragraph they talked about how
troubling the President of the New York based Child
mind institute found that “youth at the highest risk are the ones who
care the most about social networking and online communities” Again,
that is not good, but it could be a whole lot worse, so I do think that low
amount is a good thing.
The final paragraph acknowledges
that there are students who benefit from the social
skills and community's social media brings them. I’m glad they
mentioned that too, as it shows this whole article isn’t completely biased, and
gives information that I feel is needed.
In
conclusion, I feel like this article shares valuable information about the
users of social media in teenagers. I think that the mental health of people
with access to social media is important, so I’m glad they went and wrote this
article. Although, I do think the author of this is biased toward social media
being bad, as in the main portion of this article the author is focused on the
negative parts of it. However, I do not think the information provided in this
article is bad. The study they referred to multiple times specifically says
that a large majority of teenagers don’t think social media makes them more depressed,
so I think that is a good thing.
Pulling out the facts and numbers made it accurate. I think that it all depends on the teenager and how they grew up which shows how they act around Social Media.
ReplyDeleteThis is very influential, you had lots of good facts and statistics. I like your conclusion, it wrapped everything up nicely.
ReplyDeleteDoes it account for FOMO? Here is the link to a really interesting podcast. The first part talks about this exactly but focuses on everyone, not just teens.
ReplyDeletehttps://www.npr.org/2017/04/17/524005057/when-it-comes-to-our-lives-on-social-media-theres-always-another-story
This is really great! I like all the facts and how you told us exactly how you felt. I think this piece would benefit from a little editing because I found this a little confusing to read with the back and forth from the article to your opinions, and I didn't always understand your explanation of your opinion. I do think you made some really good points though.
ReplyDeleteI personally disagree with your position on social media seeming more like a good thing, but I am biased due to a research paper I wrote for LA last year. Through my research, I found that studies have shown a direst correlation between an increase in technology (not specific to social media) use and an increase in depression and suicide rates and a decrease in social interaction and high self-esteem. However, after reading part of your article, I definitely see where you're coming from.
i agree with this article without phones teens wouldnt be the same
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